Thursday, 10 April 2014

Briar's Senses Poem

I like the feel of my sister’s hugs because she loves me.
I like the smell of my hair because my shampoo is yummy.
I like the taste of cake because my mum makes yummy cakes.
I like the sound of my sister singing because it is beautiful.

I like the look of beautiful stuff like flowers because they are beautiful.

By Briar

3 comments:

  1. And I like to make cakes for you, Briar, because it is so nice to see your beautiful smile as you taste them.

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  2. What a talented writer! Well done.

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  3. You are so talented! What a touching poem.

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